My Other Side

by Chaannnii xo   Apr 25, 2007


She comes at night, when I'm fast asleep
And she makes me do things i dread
An uncontrollable presence, deep within my mind
Never seen by man

She takes over my body, limb by limb
Starting at the top, my head goes first
My mind completely lost
Now not knowing what is going on

My own conscience screams from inside,
Begging her to stop
Pleading with her, telling her to leave me be
There are so many others, why me

After my mind comes my arms,
She is now in control
Moving at her own free will
Stopping her is not an option

Follows the rest of my body
She becomes a new me
A menace and indisputable evil
Praying on all thats weak

My mind has two sides,
Day and night,
Good and evil
Keeping me from myself

All touches are cold
All thoughts maddening
Every step thats taken, is a definition of insanity
One that is known through experience only

Each heart beat is a struggle
I try hard to keep mine alive
While hers is strong and fast
Sucking life from all around

The looks on each face
The noises that are mad
Can only be described as malicious
Things like these could never be made from heaven

Satan in another form dwells within me
Trying to gather followers
People he senses that are senile
Giving into any force

All precautions must be taken
I must fight in secret
For the minute she senses it
I will be no more

My race would be extinct
All good would be taken with me
So forever I must follow, fall in place behind,
My other side

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  • 17 years ago

    by Bryan

    A bit longer now and i see u fixed some of the mistakes, still a 5/5!!! keep it up!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Chaannnii xo

    Hey.. i just wanted people to know that i havent actually finished writing this.. and i wasnt ready to post it but i didnt know how to take it down without deleting it !! but thankx for ur comments.. it really good to get some feedback !
    catch xx

  • 17 years ago

    by Bryan

    This is a very good poem chantelle, flow is a little shaky but it is very good. a few grammer mistakes, like capitalizing the beggining of the sentences and adding periods at the end of the sentences. but overall this is wonderful, i give it a 5/5!!! keep it up!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Good poem, its very cleverly written. you should be proud. keep writing xx