When Darkness Rises

by Timmmyy   Apr 26, 2007


When darkness rises the red rose dies,
The thunder clashes and all the crows flies,
When darknes rises the black rose stands above the rest,
It destroys all the other flowers and stands like the best,

The flowers venom has a deadly power,
Their life will end within an hour,
It has its dark aura within the air,
It is a feeling I cannot bare,

The flower is black and white,
It kills those who are caught in it's sight,
The flower was picked the day man fell,
Now we live as the flower does, down in hell,
As fires of hell burns its soul,
Its no more powerful than a lump of coal,
As we're down there, we wait to die,
We watch from below, as darkness rise,

The flower is the outflowing pain,
It makes us go all insane,
Sad and confused we're lead,
Because were dead,

Why we live is why the flower does,
They help us live, just because,
Love and hate is needed for one another,
Just like we learn from our sisters and brothers,

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  • 17 years ago

    by AllysonWonderland

    I love your poem it was descriptive and beautiful u should read mine of course only if you want!!!!
    luv ya always
    ALLISON

  • 17 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    Wow that was powerful, loved the way you used flowers very descriptive 5/5 maybe u can read one of mine.

  • 17 years ago

    by GretaInsideOut

    Wow a great expressive piece. not o long either. love greta.

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    xx

  • 17 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Good poem, excellent wording and skills here keep it up xxx