I liked the poem. The flow was average and leads the reader relatively well. It was a new and unique style that I haven't seen much of lately and I really enjoyed the new spice. The meaning and feeling in the poem wasn't amazing but it was present. All in all 5/5 for a great write and great effort.

You put forth a great effort, your poem is full of raw and simple emtions. It could be just alittle bit longer though, it didn't seem like the ending quite fit, like it was unfinished. but you did a good job. And I give you 4/5. Keep writting, and I will keep reading.

Oh, i like this. 5/5, thnak for the poem comments, and btw, realised was not spelt wrong, that is how you spell it here. lol. Anyway.... the use of the colon before cowards really made an essential difference. Smart.

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Beautiful even though its short! :) awesome! well done!

Interesting insight. I never though of things like that. I liked this one it was short to the point and still had a great flow. Another 5/5.