Very original. I loved it. Very well written and once again showing a lot of emotion and feeling and a deeper side of you the writer. 5/5.

I love this poem. in my opinion there's nothing wrong with it. perfect. 5/5

Aw~! Its cute and touching, I can sort of relate... But I haven't found anyone to help me... Well I have... But I don't listen... Anyway Great poem 5/5

Wow that was amazing and great wording
keep up the good work!

I love it. I feel like that sometimes
I love it

THe bit that says 'Lie down at night and cry myself to sleep'. I do that alot, alot lately

OMG!! that was REALLY good.

A wonderful, poignant poem 5/5 i love it!

Great poem!
Nice flow, beautiful written.
Love to read it.

Oh that was wonderful. It gave me a great picture in my mind. Such a sad yet great tale. Great job : ]

I always judge a poem on its first stanza, if its bad i generally leave, however... the first stanza literally dragged me to read on, the first line in fact was enough
this poem was beautiful, and a pleasure to read!
definately 5/5
xxx

It was beautiful i love it keep it up tyour great

It doesn't matter what you write about, it's always beautiful!

5/5 Ingrid

Untie the cable round my wings
Set me free and let me fly
Don't hold me down, I need to leave
My true home is in the sky..........

loved these lines, what a way to capture a reader, wonderful opening lines, very enjoyable piece! weldone! xx

Very mistic very real but fantasy i luved it

Really good.....i loved it

Wow, I really like your poem. It's really sad tho

<3 it!

Amazing write!