by *Charisma* Apr 26, 2007
category :
Life, society /
faith, religion
They say that things are meant to be |
by Tricky Daze
So meaningful and true in my opinion |
by Midnight Sun
Ok, I really love the message in this one. And I love that you decided to do a poem on a subject we both feel very strongly about but I think the flow was a little hard for me to follow. Just a little off. But other than that it truly was beautiful. It describes everything bad in this world while still offering hope of Jehovah interfering. Great job! :) |
Everything in this poem was true, |
by Gem
Wow.. a very powerful poem you've written here.. |
Wow..Excellent job |