Wow..Excellent job
Your words rhythm rhyme
everything was perfectly stated and put
and your message was wonderful
greatjob
5/5

Wow.. a very powerful poem you've written here..
As always your rhythm is spot on, but it's the meanings that i'm impressed with.
You've touched on so many different aspects on whats wrong with the world today and you've addressed them perfectly..
Well done.. outstanding poem
5/5
*Gem*

Everything in this poem was true,
aweful to think about society these days
and what it has come to be,
but Dear, you did an amazing job!
I'm really liking your poems, haha.

"Or that the wars going on around us
And the killing in them taking place
Is destiny. Go ahead and say that.
Could you say it to their families face?"

^^ That stanza really stuck out to me
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5.5
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Ok, I really love the message in this one. And I love that you decided to do a poem on a subject we both feel very strongly about but I think the flow was a little hard for me to follow. Just a little off. But other than that it truly was beautiful. It describes everything bad in this world while still offering hope of Jehovah interfering. Great job! :)
~Midnight Sun

So meaningful and true in my opinion
I especially liked those,

From accepting the responsibility
That this world is in love's drought.

Well done,
Laura