by TheWorldFellNUWerentThere Apr 26, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
My heart is breaking, |
by isabel
This is really a very sad written poem... |
by Alesia
Wow. That was a really great poem! I'm sorry you had to go through that. It was nicely penned. I could just picture the bruises and all that, It was not pretty, but you got your point well across. |
by Alesia
Wow. That was a really great poem! I'm sorry you had to go through that. It was nicely penned. I could just picture the bruises and all that, It was not pretty, but you got your point well across. |
by Vanessa
I love tha raw emtion you used in this poem. It was deep, dark and so sad. am so sorry that you had to go though that. You did good keep up the good work 4/5 |