Comments : I Can't Write A Poem

  • 17 years ago

    by Sherry Lynn

    LOL I know this feeling all too well. I face it daily. Thanks for the little laughter and letting me know that I am not alone in this world of "Oh My"..

    A little tiny suggestion babe, in the very fist line it would sound better if you removed the word "a" and let it read
    "I can't write poetry"

    Just a suggestion, but hey it could also be me.

    --Sher

  • 17 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    That made me laugh, you can write, it was awsome 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by David

    Ah well done. i love how it all was described. excellent in fact!

    5/5 David

  • 17 years ago

    by LostLikeTearsInRain

    Haha certainly is a random poem, but that's what makes it so unique, keep it up 5/5.

  • 17 years ago

    by June

    Well done and you can write I have been reading some of your others and very much enjoyed the read.Take care.

  • 17 years ago

    by carissalynn

    This is so cute, haha adorable!

  • 17 years ago

    by Anonymous Angel

    Hey,
    so cute and unique, i really enjoyed reading this one =)
    good work.
    kisses Stephanie

  • 17 years ago

    by Kaila

    Well I dont really understand the last line maybe it just went over my head im not quite for sure. But the rest was cool I love how people write poems about not being able to write poems it shows talent nice work!

  • 17 years ago

    by Wallace

    Excellent poem, i found it very creative. It had a flawless flow and it grasped the reader's attention from the beginning to the end, well done.

  • 17 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    Wow thanks u make me smile hehehe... i really enjoyed.. keep it up and hope u can write more and more.. and the more u write the more better and better so keep on writing....

    its me,
    sweet lig

  • 17 years ago

    by Choose xX Alex Xx Life

    Lol yer, a urm... different approach lol, i actuallyl iked it. Not some scary sad poem but funny i feel :D

    xxx alex xxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Rinji

    Nice I have never heard a poem like this it turned out spectacular!!!

  • 15 years ago

    by xx

    It would appear that you can write poems very well. Haha. I fancy this poem. (I adore the word 'fancy'.) XD

    5/5