The Baby's cry

by Alma   Apr 26, 2007


A young mother who loves
her baby living in poverty
is forced to kill her child
but why?
when the soldiers are marching down the streets
not a sound is heard if not it will be destroyed the soldiers seek out
people looking out for who is there who they can catch
the baby filled of fear begins to cry
the mother must cover the sound before
the soldiers hear
and kill
everyone in the villiage
when the time passes
she removes her hand from the baby's mouth
and she screams out as if in pain
shes killed her own child

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  • 17 years ago

    by Janessa

    Really really good keep it up

  • 17 years ago

    by BeLLa

    Omg
    this is so well written
    it made me just . lost for words
    excellent
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by WiNgS Of StEeL

    Awww ..this is so deep and has so many emotions in it..just loved and i liked the emotive words u used in there aswell:D
    kep up the good work
    bree

  • 17 years ago

    by mimzy

    Wow, this was really touching.
    love it.
    keep it up

  • 17 years ago

    by Fsams

    Superb dear, so mounful feelings and well expressed. I feel glad for you cz you have written a very true and natural piece. Great 5/5