by Tracy D Rollings Apr 26, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
Met a lady playing pool one night |
It all went together nicely but i've read some of your other poems and I really think you could have made the ending stronger :) |
by Nikki
I really like the way you write I can feel every emotion you put into it keep it up and I will continue to read them. 5/5 |
by moonlil
That's a lovely poem. |