by Two Faced Angel Apr 26, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Little girl, so sad and weak |
That's so sad. a Beautifully penned poem. All in all it was great. Thank's for sharing. |
by GothChick
Great work! It had a deep meaning and was really terrific! keep up the good work! :) |
Great job on the poem , I liked it , bur like anqelina said it needs some work but I really liked it , |
by angelina
Good work ... the second stanza may need some work but over all i loved it... |