I really like this poem , it`s my favorite of all the poems i`ve ever read ; i`ve read many . =]

Hey JubJub

5/5 cuz you're my best buddy =)
Tho the poem doesn't really rhyme well, and the structure may be unbalanced, but you communicate your point which is the most important thing : D That's why I think it deserves 5 stars.
Looking forward to reading more of your newer poems in the future!