Freedom...yeah...the feeling i get after reading this one is to just grab a bike and ride on a highway (without helmet) .. :o) but then i will end up paying cops.. :o)

loved this one...its really very beautifully written...great poem indeed

all the best and take care

Beautiful feelings in this one Cindy! Can feel the wind in my hair and see the open road...

Your first free verse poem is so well done Cindy....good job!

Whoo - is it hot in here - or is it me? I loved the double entendre of the piece. Well done Cindy :-)

Hmmm cindy welldone. Intresting.

Very creative piece cindy, i think this is the first non rhyme poem ive seen u write. it takes a good writer to switch styles like that and do so good, i give it a 5/5!!

Well i bet you would have won the contest. this poem was so insighting. well done.

5/5 David

Finally got the motorcycle challenge huh?
You did a good job and it could have a double meaning (ha ha). Nicely done!

Hmm Cindy, i can see what your trying to say and also what you're not saying, lol
But seriously, coming from someone who is rubbish at free verse and probably has no idea what they're talking about, just let me say this.
Outstanding =)
5/5
*Gem*

Another stupendous poem by you, Ms. Cindy. I actually had no idea what your writing about, I dare say. But as I finished reading this delightful write, I was grinning widely. I'm delightfully impressed. =]
'Twas a terrific ride, ne?
Love,
Debbie

Awsome!

This poem is awesome keep it up!

Excellently written, a real work of art, keep it up.

This is really different from alot of your work, but still written with the utmost perfection, well done cindy.

"My hands itching to open your throttle"

thats an amazing line right there...leaves everything to the imagination, can mean many different things..thats true talent right there

Excellent write Cindy proud of you on this one
Scared yet excitement taking over
My hands itching to open your throttle
nice flow and great wording ,great job~~~~5/5
your friend Tracy