She wanted to fight...

by Monica AKA Mika   Apr 26, 2007


She wanted to fight, because she wanted to be here so bad,
She worked so hard to get here and to lose it all would all be so sad.
She wanted to fight, because she wanted to make her dreams a reality,
She wanted to fix all of her mistakes so things would be the way they should be.
She wanted to fight, because she knew that what she did was wrong,
She knew something was going to happen and she wouldn't be on this Earth long.
She wanted to fight, for her life because she now knew what he had done,
She wished she could go back in time and change everything because she wanted to save her son.
She wanted to fight...HIM the father because he didn't stop to use his head,
She wanted to make his problems reality too just to see what he would've said.
She wanted to fight for the truth as to why he didn't care,
She wanted to see if he would be a good father and actually be there.
She wanted to fight for her son, for if he came out like her...
She knew that a huge problem would most definitely occur.
She wanted to fight because she knew she was getting worse everyday.
But she knew that she had to fix this problem in some kind of way.
She wanted to fight, but in the end she had to choose,
Save her life or start a new, it wouldn't matter because she would lose...
She wanted to fight but this fight you didn't understand you must not see,
She was only trying to fight so that her son wouldn't be born with HIV...

By: Monica Swanagan Dedicated to every mother or child with HIV.

~ I put this under love because she loved her baby daddy before he did this to her and she loves her baby so much that she is trying to save him from being like her with HIV.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Startle Me

    Like I've said with your other poems...
    It's overwhelming.
    You kept repeating "she", it was anoying.
    I don't know if you want to hear it again.
    But just erase a few words and this poem would be fantastic.
    This story is powerful.
    Although it kind of feels as though I've read it before.
    I'm not saying that you copied this from someone.
    Oh no my dear.
    Don't get me wrong.
    I'm saying it seems a bit... cliched.
    I don't know, diseases always seem cliched to me.
    I don't know why.
    Other than that,
    I guess it's okay.
    4/5?

  • 17 years ago

    by Stephanie Naylor

    I thought it was ver nicely worded, it was strong and powerful and it had a good message. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Beautiful...Great wrk....Kp up the good wrk..The style u've used is different.....Kp writing......u've portrayed a beautiful messg thru this 1..Good wrk!

  • 17 years ago

    by Dave

    Im with I coz this pain on this one seemed sort of long altho i really did like it just maybe to rambeling .... still an exclent mesage