by Monica AKA Mika Apr 26, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
cyber love
She wanted to fight, because she wanted to be here so bad, |
by Startle Me
Like I've said with your other poems... |
I thought it was ver nicely worded, it was strong and powerful and it had a good message. 5/5 |
Beautiful...Great wrk....Kp up the good wrk..The style u've used is different.....Kp writing......u've portrayed a beautiful messg thru this 1..Good wrk! |
by Dave
Im with I coz this pain on this one seemed sort of long altho i really did like it just maybe to rambeling .... still an exclent mesage |