This really opened up my eyes. i mean i hardly ever "judge a book by its cover" but sometimes i forget and do anyway.. next time i see someone who seems to have everything iwill step back and check the situation out.. Thanks for writting this.. it was awsome another 5/5

I'm an opinionated sort of person, so take this as you will. I don't see an actualy point to the poem. I get the message, not doubt, but it lacks direction. I think it should give some trace of it having to do with you. Rhyming poems aren't my dig, but you had a good breathing scheme and kept me at an even heart rate, which is hard for alot of people to do. If you did this on purpose, good job. I'd say a 3.7, but I might bump to a 4, maybe.

That was soo good. it has rally made me think twice about everyone1 and its soo tru! that was awesome, the best i'v read! wel done keep itup. great flow it was jus great!
HANZxoxo thnx so mch 4 ur cmmnt!

Wow. What really made this poem work was that you targeted a range of people not justo ne or two. This may open peoples eyes on the site if they read and if you helps one person it will have been worthwhile. Certainly you made me think :D

thank you for opening my eyes

xxx alex xxx

Wow this poem was amazing. i love it. everything was true and i totally agree that people should get to know the truth before they decide to be mean and hateful great job! 5/5

Wow.
im actually in love with this =] Its brilliant.
xoxoxo

WOW you have captured my life in your poem, Excellent write, love the flow and wording was great , i know the feeling very well come from a home of abuse myself ,so thanks,~5/5~ your friend Tracy

This is really true, and a well writen poem. i really like this and the point it is making! x x x

This poem should be posted on the walls of every high school! No doubt this poem will touch many lives, each in their own ways.

A very well thought out poem; vocab and rhythm included. Keep writing more poems as good as this!

~Richi~

This is amazing. it has such a great message is really an eye opener. I love the cold honest truth about it.