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by Jenni Marie Apr 26, 2007 category : Love, romance / lost love
Loving you almost destroyed me Blinded me with pain Praying you would set me free Loving you was like a hammer to the heart. Used to think I'd be with you forever But now I finally see We were not meant to be together Loving you was like a hammer to the heart. You took pleasure in my pain Cruel words you spoke Made me feel I was going insane Loving you was like a hammer to the heart. Spent so long trying to get over you Days filled with lonely tears Nights spent alone and blue Loving you was like a hammer to the heart. Constantly wiping my eyes Feeling like I was in hell Now I finally realize Loving you was like a hammer to the heart.
by Romantic Lover
That was so sad and I hope its not true. I liked this style, it was different and I don't think I've read this style on any poems here. You kept the rhyme scheme up well and still reiterated your message in each stanza. Good job.