Seem to love you more each day = It seems i love you more each day...

That you will never go away. = that you'll never go away

Used to dread each day arriving = I Used to dread each day arriving

Tell me you've fallen in love with me to. = Tell me you've fallen in love with me too.

Wonderful poem. I enjoyed the repeated first line, a line that isn't often repeated surprisingly in poems. You did a good job at expressing yourself, although the poems' flow was sometimes thrown off by a word or a syllable. Other than that, wonderful job, m'dear.

5/5
~Stephen White

I agree with what stephen said about how to change your lines.. I would've said the exact same thing..Also..up untill the last staza every other line rhymed..So not ryhming the last stanza through the flow off..."you" and "to" rhymed but it was the first and last line.. This is the only thing I can see that needs improved...Besides the lines which stephen has already pointed out..I think this poem was still great though.. 5/5