Won't You Stay Awake For Me?

by myshiningstar14   Apr 26, 2007


**Won't You Stay Awake For Me?**

Tavern walls barricade this heart,
from giving you all I got,
I close my eyes,
opening them,
the absence of you fills,
kills me.
A small tear rolls down my face,
than another,
and another,
and another....

My pink cored lips
are dry,
they miss
the touch of your
tender kiss.
My mind races,
traces the moments we've
had together,
stopping to day-dream
of our soon to be forever.

Stitched together,
my heart to yours,
or so it seems;
a fire of our love burns,
it burns through the
absence of your touch.

I know when you're
finally next to me,
that we'll fall asleep
in one another's arms;
but I just got to ask
you one thing...

Won't you stay?
Won't you stay awake
for me?
Your fingertips
that got me so caught
in this,
and the sunrise that
captures me in your
beauty which is
like a massive war
upon my soul.

Shall I compare you to
a summer's day?
I can't find words,
and this war's
got me trying to
fight to keep us
awake.
Fighting to keep
us awake,
cause there's
no place I'd rather
be than in your arms.

Our memories seep
from my veins,
weightless
yet bound by you and I.

Your face in my mind,
stares at me
our eyes are growing tired,
and everywhere we turn
there's pain and shame.
You pull me close,
kissing me passionately,
wrapping me inside you,
inside the beat of you,
inside the beat of our
heart.

Our souls flare,
burning with care
as I can't help but stare,
and my mouth speaks
wanting to know
"Won't you stay?
Won't you stay awake?
Stay awake for me?"

** to my baby I wrote this cause I love lying next to you and sometimes i dont even want to go to sleep even with you next to me cause I'd rather be looking at your beautiful face...

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  • 17 years ago

    by Weeping Wolf

    Won't you stay?
    Won't you stay awake
    for me?
    Your fingertips
    that got me so caught
    in this,
    and the sunrise that
    captures me in your
    beauty which is
    like a massive war
    upon my soul.

    -My favorite stanza, especially the "your fingertips, that got me so caught in this" such a powerful, unique line. love it. I'm dying to read more...

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    "My pink cored lips
    are dry,
    they miss
    the touch of your
    tender kiss."

    That was so beautiful..
    The whole poem was just such a gorgeous piece, the love was shining through.
    I hope things get better for you soon.
    5/5
    *Gem*

    (Yeah, in the sestina it was hard adding imagery when i was limited to six words =)

  • 17 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    Side-Note: THis poem is written because me nad bf are going through my ex,...he threatened ot hurt me and him so we're being escorted by police at school and what not so the "Tavern Barriers" are school and our houses. ANd I cry cause I wish I could be there to make sure he got home safely...bc theres a warrent out for my exs arrest and yeh. hope you all fele the emotion in this. thanxs for reading..pls leave your comments.

    Melissa