Side-Note: THis poem is written because me nad bf are going through my ex,...he threatened ot hurt me and him so we're being escorted by police at school and what not so the "Tavern Barriers" are school and our houses. ANd I cry cause I wish I could be there to make sure he got home safely...bc theres a warrent out for my exs arrest and yeh. hope you all fele the emotion in this. thanxs for reading..pls leave your comments.

Melissa

"My pink cored lips
are dry,
they miss
the touch of your
tender kiss."

That was so beautiful..
The whole poem was just such a gorgeous piece, the love was shining through.
I hope things get better for you soon.
5/5
*Gem*

(Yeah, in the sestina it was hard adding imagery when i was limited to six words =)

Won't you stay?
Won't you stay awake
for me?
Your fingertips
that got me so caught
in this,
and the sunrise that
captures me in your
beauty which is
like a massive war
upon my soul.

-My favorite stanza, especially the "your fingertips, that got me so caught in this" such a powerful, unique line. love it. I'm dying to read more...