Comments : Doll Parts.

  • 17 years ago

    by Elizabetta

    Interesting use of words, Isabelle. You really expressed your feelings in an unusual and unique way, great job!

    I have shaped myself in so many ways,
    I don't know my true self,
    the girl I really am.

    I really liked this line, and many others, but this one really stood out to me.
    This is a really good poem. 5/5

    ~Lizzie~

  • 17 years ago

    by Elizabetta

    I had more to say:

    I have to admitt the title scared me a little at first, but it really did turn out to be good. Okay, Im done now.

    ~Lizzie~