Comments : Turn Away

  • 17 years ago

    by Giovanni

    It sounds like this girl has to struggle with the tyranny and darkness that has consumed her life. And the only thing to keep her happy is the one thing that hurts her (the razor). But not everyone needs to live that way. Everyday is a struggle and sometimes people don't see what self-infliction is and the people that have that problem...

    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by katy

    I reli like this peom so full of true emotions and meanful word i love it xx

  • 17 years ago

    by SeGrAdA

    So sad but u seem like a such good writer,
    we all do feel that way, trust me.
    "So close your eyes and turn away,
    As she struggles to live another day."
    u ended ur poem with a such great rhym.
    looking forward 2 read more of ur poem.

  • 17 years ago

    by Lisa

    Great work

  • 16 years ago

    by she

    Wow,im speechless,amazing is all i can say,this is definetly on my favs!