This poem was amazing.
Very into depth and nicely penned.
I'm glad to know that you are capable of writing about such a depressing subject.
Great write 5/5!

A look at the rapists view of thing. excellent, an awesome read. keep it up and i'll keep reading

your servant:
david

Wonderful poem. i loved the use of words and the way you described everything. it was all very good and very well written. 5/5 keep up the great work.

Wow, that was very powerful. Keep up the good work. it was just amazing!

Awhh this poem almost made me cry. but it was wonderfully written! 5/5 for a great poem.

That was so sad. Poor girl. People do such terrible things these days. It was very good. Xx Chrissie

Wow very powerful piece! I loved this one, everything is perfectly placed and detail is excellent. 5/5 keep writing!

Very good....captured reality a little bit i'd like to think

Very sad...i loved it 5/5

Wow , this poem was very good . it was a steady flow , i really liked it . even though it kinda made me teary eyed .

keep up the good work .

This poem was very good. I write in similar stories, so feel free to check them out anytime. Maybe my poems can relate to what happened to you. I'm so very sorry. This poem was a great read. Very well done! 5/5

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Wow. Your poems entrap me. So hypnotizing! wheeoo

This is sucha beautiful poem...scary adn sad...but beautiful

your an awesome writer i love your writing
Im adding yout o my fav list

great great job!

love always!
~shannon~

This is a really powerful poem. Fantastic use of words. Sent chills down my spine. Hope you haven't personally been through this
xxx

This Poem was great and i normally dont comment many poems but this one was beautifully written! 5/5 great writing!

That's amazing, it's sad and beautiful writting

That's amazing, it's sad and beautiful writting

Its a beautifly written poem, you descibed things without useing profane language, and you used intense words to portray a message, very strong, and very good. 5/5