Don't Take The Boy

by .mommy_3   Apr 26, 2007


About a month ago,
the doctor told him he only had 6 months to live..
for him to live..
everything I'd give..

he's laying in his bed
with no strength or hair..
Heaven was waiting for him
& soon he'd be there..

i softly prayed to God
for him not to take him away..
i needed him..
i couldn't live without him one single day..

don't take the boy
i need him here..
don't take the boy
i don't think i could bare..

he took his final breath
& there went my world..
now my family is praying
don't take the girl..

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  • 16 years ago

    by XxNeverlettinyougoxX

    I loved this poem!!
    5/5 definitly!
    great work

  • 17 years ago

    by Niinaa

    Amazing, ur emotions are so strong in poetry its a great way to release your emotions also need someone to talk to im here im one year younger but ive been through alot so talk to me if you want

  • 17 years ago

    by xBxRxOxKxExNx

    Aww.. omg!.. wow.. hope that's not your story hun and its imagination because the poems extrodinary bt the feelins are so sad.. mail if u need to tlk to anyone, i'd b happy to help, sometimes it's easier to talk to strangers X

  • 17 years ago

    by The Unwritten Love

    What a nice poem .. so sad ... it's great ,,,

    Good job,. keep it up

  • 17 years ago

    by emo angel

    I love your pome! its really sad but you showed the emotion really well

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