This is a well written poem.. very good.. Nice flow.. please keep writting!!! strong emotions in it..

I liked this one alot too, the flow was dead on, the rhyme was great. The poem was very powerful, and it showed your passion in it. Keep up the good work, =) 5/5
-Ally

Well, this would have to be the best poem you have written and that I have read. The verses were well constructed, and the flow was excellent. I loved the last two lines, they summed up the poem well and ended it perfectly. Great poem!

REALLY DARK.
THE AGONYOF LOSING SOME ONE DEAR
IS DEPICTED CLEARLY IN THIS POEM !!

This is a really good poem you put a lot of emotion into it nice job~
5/5

I can never stop crying
Because I can see her face
The way she dressed
In violet hues and lace

Great great words. Awesome and flawless flow. I loved all the lines in this stanza. You have nicely expressed your feelings. 5/5 doubtless

Sorry about whomever you've lost. Need anyone to talk to, just lemme know. Great write. -T. Jane

This poem is very powerful and many people can relate...beautiful job=]

Awww, so sad! I hope she will return to you!

Beautiful poem, though!

Take care,

5/5 Ingrid

Wow...beautiful poem...so sad and heartbreaking....flowed perfectly...great job!!!! definatly a 5/5

This is sad. And amazing, because you conveyed the emotion so perfectly. So many people can relate to that, and your words frame the feelings beautifully.
5/5 and a round of applause.
-Sophie