Bloody Kiss

by LovinMyLife   Apr 27, 2007


I let my tears fall
I can't hold them in
My wrists are crying too
I released another sin

The blade dug in deep
It hurt like h3ll
But this is between you and me
So please don't tell

The knife didn't help me
Get over you
So I found the gun
And started round two

I blew you a bloody kiss
While the cold metal sat against my head
Look what you've done to me
You've made me wish to be dead

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  • 17 years ago

    by claire

    Great writing - powerful but very sad. the rhyming etc. was really good - you're really talented! :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Amy

    I love this poem you go girly girl girlfriend!!!!! i heart you!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Wake

    FTW!!!!

    AWESOME .... (do i really need to say this?lol)

    really... really nice and a very heavy poem..i love it :D

    good job

  • 17 years ago

    by June

    A very powerful write ,brought a tear to my eye ,I wonder what it is that makes someone so young wish to end their life.Life is worth living ,you have to hold onto your hopes and dreams.Take care x

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