A very powerful write ,brought a tear to my eye ,I wonder what it is that makes someone so young wish to end their life.Life is worth living ,you have to hold onto your hopes and dreams.Take care x

FTW!!!!

AWESOME .... (do i really need to say this?lol)

really... really nice and a very heavy poem..i love it :D

good job

I love this poem you go girly girl girlfriend!!!!! i heart you!!

Great writing - powerful but very sad. the rhyming etc. was really good - you're really talented! :)