OMG. Even tho it's really sad I LOVE It. It's great, really. You should read my poem "Ashes of My Broken Heart" or some of my others. i would appreciate it. once again i loved it
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L.C

I love it! It is sad yes, but I think it has a wonderful ending. The ending is dark, but powerful. It has a sense of finality for the poem. Good job.