Hey great poem! really well written with a very lovely flow. emotions were clear, good describing words! good job!!
p.s. i'd really love it if u'd check my poems out and rate/comment them. thanks alot!!

OMG absoultly LOVE this! im going threw something kinda like that right now...oh i love it sooooooo much. im adding it 2 my favorites! great job! i love the words you used and it had a great flow! keep it up.
if you wouldn't mind checking out some of my new ones that would be great! great job! 5/5

BabyGurl

Very deep and emotion-felt. breakups suck and u just proved it to anyone questioning that fact

WOOW YOU HAVE A LOT OF TALENT .. NOT ONLY DOES THIS RHYME (THATS REALLY HARD TO FIND NOW A DAYS) BUT IT EXPRESSES YOUR EMOTIONS IN A VERY DESCRIPTIVE WAY... GREAT POEM =] I LOVED IT