Comments : I Miss You a Little

  • 17 years ago

    by just me

    I know you still love me
    And I know you do care.
    But words quit healing
    The wounds you've left there.

    i like this poem, i like ths above stanza alot. i like the way it's understood that he loves her but her hurts her. it's not like alot of things where the girl completely writes them off because they made a mistake...do u kno wat im tryin t say? hopefull so.
    <3
    L.C

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    "So here's an apology
    From my heart to your own.
    Though I know how it feels,
    I won't leave you alone."

    Thats true love. Right there! *points*
    When you put yourself last for the one you love, despite the pain and hurt that they put you through.
    And i can understand it as well..
    Excellent rhythm Charisma and beautiful poem
    5.5
    *Gem*

  • 17 years ago

    by Poetess Lana

    I liked how you repeated a verse in there; it gave the poem emphasis. another fantastic write and another

    5/5
    Allanah