I Don't Love You Anymore

That is something that most of the people can relate to in life about our love life... so good job and I really do hope that you never stop writing good job 5/5

I love this a lot, i can relate completly, i tried getting in a relationship were he loved me but i just couldnt tell him i loved him back no matter how much i tried and it ended up not workin out! I love this so much and i really appreciate you writting this cuz i feel like crying every time i read it i think i read it over and over again like 5 times! 5/5

"I tried loving you,
I truly did,
But the flame burned out,
And the task became harder,
I'm sorry, I just don't love you anymore."

Tha hardest things to do is break up a relationship when you care about the person but just don't love them in the same way anymore cos hurting them hurts you..
I'm rambling now, overall such an amazing poem.. Well done
5/5
*Gem*

P.S. In england it's 'Cosy'. =) Same as how it's 'realise' over here and not 'realize'. =)

Really well worded poem, it had a good flow to it and also very striking. it was dark and had a sinister singe to it. i loved th repitition, very powerful.

Excellent poem great flow and well written ,great job all in all i loved it great work 5/5