Aww.. I love the fact that I can totally relate to this poem. I'm sorry you had to go through something like that.. Men are aweful aren't they??
=(
But good job!
5/5

Very heartfelt poem. I like how you had some sentences ending in the middle of a line, really unique--- You did a great job portraying the emotion in this poem, and I also love how you ended it with a question!

Great write 5/5

Your rhyming sounds a little forced, and the flow is a little scattered. I like how the last line of every staza rhymes, though. It was just okay to me.

Awesome poem.
but yes why?
maybe it'd be best to talk to him...maybe it'll then be easier to get through, hwne you know hat his reason was.
tell me how it went ;D
5/5

The flow was a little off throughout this poem but i liked the meaning portrayed. The word choice was simple but effective. In the first two lines i wasnt keen on how both lines finished with the word "me" i think that made the flow unbalanced, The meaning portrayed was nice. Overall i think this poem was pretty good. Well done~mel

Great job!
Great emotion!
Loved it.
But, someone does & will love you hun.
5/5

I thought it was kind of sad but also a very nice poem, i liked to see the way you pulled it all together, 5/5

This is quite good. I would think though instead of saying I say bye it should be I say goodbye, just kind of sounds better, at least I think so anyway, otherwise it's very good and I like it.

Much Love,
.:Danielle:.

Another great love poem (even though its sad love). It had a nice flow and I could feel the emotions it contained. Never stop writing. *5/5*

Alyson

I really liked this one too. I think almost every girl can relate to this... 5/5

Ravyn

Hmmm i like this one better than the last one i read of yours, flows much better. great work