by Goran Rahim Apr 27, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
Look, |
by isabel
"the key to her heart"...a classic... |
Aww.. this poem is adorable.. a very enjoyable read.. i really like how you speak of the key and of flying into the corners of the city and then let it be clear in the last stanza as to why you do those things.. the word choice was nice the flow was off in places but overall an excellent poem :D |
by Stephanie
Wonderful job. |
by Kelsea
Holy shiz! Good job on this. Powerful, and so... |
by Erin
Wow thats amazing keep up the good work |