The first and second stanza
Really didn't catch my interest
But when I read the third one
I was hooked.
I didn't know you were talking about
Being in love until then.
I like the flow of it.
The air of myster around it.
I love that you didn't come out
And just talked about love at the very beginning.
It ruins a poem when the get to the point.
Lol.
People need to beat around the bush more often.
Otherwise.
5/5?

Excellent Poem! I like everythign about this poem, its got 5/5 all over it and 5/5 is what you shall have! good job please keep writing!

Very good poem. great flow. i love the meaning. if this is something thats happening in your life i hope u find that key. Great Job!

This is such a sweet poems. It flows nicely and the repitition of key brought it together. Keep up the good work. *5/5*

Alyson

Excellent poem, very creative, but i thought the ending could be better though, but it was a good write. Keep it up.

"That key is
The key to the heart of
A person
Who locked her heart,
Because of
The pain of reality."
Again i am the last person to write a comment,i would say sorrie but u know.LOL tat is mi fav. line of all the poem dast xosh! 5/5

Wow.
This poem is
UH-MAZE-ZING!
Eck.
I'm sorry.
This is so friggin sweet.
I love how you didn't just come
Out and say
I'm looking for the key
Of my loved ones heart.
You waited until the very end
There was a lot of anticipation going on.
It's great.
Eck. I love it.
5/5?

I love the idea of this poem. Certainly you've written it well. It's a very interesting poem!

I only have one word for you....sweet

Very nicely done Goran as always, a great poem from a great poet. I enjoyed the read, the flow as well as the structure where both good. Great work as always, keep it up.

Peace, Joe

<33

I abxolutely am in LOVE with the rythm of this poem. I'm not sure what else to say, there's really nothing to make suggestions about. 5/5

The metaphor in this poe is beautiful. I like metaphorical poems because I enjoy picturing them literally, but grasping the meaning behind it. good job goran.

5/5.

Wow i really like the metephore of the key and how you used it nicley written!

Wow.
You did an outstanding job with this poem.
I loved it. :D
I think that guys who actually 'search for the key' are some of the best guys out there.

Keep up the great work, hun.
5/5
<3 teria.

Wow thats amazing keep up the good work

Holy shiz! Good job on this. Powerful, and so...
I dunno. It sounds clean. I love how you taked about the way a person's heart can be locked. It's so very true, and...it hit me. Great job.

K

Wonderful job.
You most certainly have a way with words. It was beautiful & the images were vivid in my mind. I loved the message that the poem told.... fabulous job. Keep writing! You're a very talented writer, as always & I look forward to reading more of your work. :]
5.5

Stephanie Lynn .+.

Aww.. this poem is adorable.. a very enjoyable read.. i really like how you speak of the key and of flying into the corners of the city and then let it be clear in the last stanza as to why you do those things.. the word choice was nice the flow was off in places but overall an excellent poem :D

"the key to her heart"...a classic...
but written in the most beautiful way...
5/5
keep going
*isabel*