Comments : Handin Out the Pieces of my Heart

  • 17 years ago

    by SiLeNtLy ScReAmInG

    I liked the poem. The rhyming seemed a little forced, but some of it wasn't that bad. My favorite part was the last two lines:

    "This is rippin me apart
    Guess I handed out too many pieces of my broken heart"

    Good job with this poem.

  • 17 years ago

    by Domino0792

    I love this poem. You're really talented. Your poetry has real meaning. Well penned, all the best and take care

    -Xoxo-