Holy crap.... im speechless by the depth of this poem, very good wording and detail. 5/5 this poem is also very sad for un said reasons.....memories suck

Wow! A really smashing poem! It's kinda hard to put it in words. I liked this one a lot. I could see just about everything that was happening. I like the description. Once again, punctuation would make this poem flow a lot nicer. Other than that, it was well penned. Good job, and 5/5.

Whoa!!!..gr8 job nicwe wording and an excellent poem!!:D
keep it up!
5/5 for me!!
bree xx

Really good poem...i like your structure...its very unique poem ..very interesting story
-alicia

Wow!.......this is freakin osm i love it i like the darkness of it all and its an amazing piece of work now one of my favs
much love
laura