5/5 excellent poem. excellent way to tell a story beautiful show of emotions and love. well done keep writing

Its a good poem different but i liked it

Whoo, like it!

Wow!!!!!!.....Beautiful!.very well written!...i like the words u've used..it's diferent though.but it sure gives the poem a 10 times better look.......Kp writing!
Tk care!
xxPoojaxx

Loved it alot keep it up