When I go down [Acrostic]

by Infected with His Deadly Love   Apr 27, 2007


When I go down
He will be there
Everytime, to pick me up
Nice and easily

I know he'll always be there

Guiding me through
One step at a time

Doing everything he can
One problem after the other
Wiping away my tears
Never letting go

Acrostic Poetry is where the first letter of each line spells a word, usually using the same
words as in the title.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Startle Me

    It's funny.
    When I read the title
    I thought it was going to be sexual.
    When I read the second line of your stanza
    I was like, Ahh.
    Lol.
    But it was pretty good.
    You passion to be published one day
    Maybe you already are, lol.
    But still, poetry is really your thing.
    Keep on doing it :]

  • 17 years ago

    by The lil angel

    Nice

  • 17 years ago

    by Lesbian Natalie

    Sounds like he really loves you....awesome poem...

  • 17 years ago

    by Wallace

    Very good poem and i like the creativity in the form, excellent work, keep it up.

  • 17 years ago

    by Vanessa

    Really really good. I think it is good that you try diffrent types of poetry. And you do so well at all of them. Once more good job 5/5

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