Comments : When I go down [Acrostic]

  • 17 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    A greatly written romantic acrostic in which we can feel the romance. i really like the way you have created this beautiful acrostic as everyone here knows acrostcs are my favorite type of poetry.
    keep up the great work as you are really a great talented poet.
    a 5/5 from me as you really deserve it.

  • 17 years ago

    by Seronum

    Excellent poem, its great to express your feelings for others nothing better than in a poem. 5/5!

  • 17 years ago

    by Darien

    That was a very sweet poem.
    Not really that romantic, but not too mushy,
    it was a pleasant read :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Bryan

    This is a pretty good acrostic, i give it a 5/5!!! keep it up!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by ImNotPerfect20

    Really good.. I give a 5/5 because doing acrostic's can be hard at times!.. keep writing

  • 17 years ago

    by dollwithafrown

    This just made me say "Aww!" out loud. Haha. It was generally really sweet. There was nothing absolutely astonishingly amazing, but it was a very sweet poem. Lovely.

  • I think you by far are the best Acrostic poet I've seen. You don't force it, or so it seems. You write with your heart. I'm adding you to my favorites, so keep writing, .=)
    -Ally

  • 17 years ago

    by Miu

    Aww and that is all that caring and loving is about! Very sweet and ur an amazing writer! Beautiful poem. :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Vanessa

    Really really good. I think it is good that you try diffrent types of poetry. And you do so well at all of them. Once more good job 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Wallace

    Very good poem and i like the creativity in the form, excellent work, keep it up.

  • 17 years ago

    by Lesbian Natalie

    Sounds like he really loves you....awesome poem...

  • 17 years ago

    by The lil angel

    Nice

  • 17 years ago

    by Startle Me

    It's funny.
    When I read the title
    I thought it was going to be sexual.
    When I read the second line of your stanza
    I was like, Ahh.
    Lol.
    But it was pretty good.
    You passion to be published one day
    Maybe you already are, lol.
    But still, poetry is really your thing.
    Keep on doing it :]