by ForeverYoung Apr 27, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
(old poem from my old account "Never Trust Again" |
by Claudd
Wow that was great 5/5 |
That was really beautiful, it was so well writeen and the fact that it told such a powerful story it was simply touching. I was really into it to. Good work, really |
by Marc Ortiz
That was long but simply amazing! it kept my attention from start to end! The flow was flawless, I like the imagery you have created in this beautiful poem. I really like the tragic ending :) it shows how much the girl love the guy. Excellent poem. |
Wow... I love this poem... you could just picture the swing... and everything that was happening... beautifully written, very very sad... it's a wonderful yet heartbreaking poem... I love these lines: |
Well first of even though this poem is long like Shadow stalker said 'It's their loss". Because I think every moment I spent reading it was worth it. I loved the poem, I loved the feeling, I loved the sadness portrayed when you loose someone you love, and most of all I love its innocence and it shows the harsh reality of life. I don't know, but this poem somehow really touched me. I really really like it. 5/5 wouldn't do it justice, but this website won't let me vote more than once...so gosh! :( |