This is a pretty good poem, the only mistake i could see was that the title wasnt capitalized, but this is a 5/5!!!! keep it up!!!

That was really good. the flow was good and the word choice was excellent 5/5. I can relate.

Cool poem. I loved it. I'v been through something like that. Anyways I gave you a 5/5.

:( i can relate to this, i know what it feels like to care for someone this much but have then turn a blind eye to you :(

THATS GOOD!
ALWAYS KEEP UR HEAD UP NO MATTER WHAT MAKES YOU WANNA BRING IT DOWN...DONT EVER HIDE UR FACE OR YOU'LL NEVER SHINE WITHOUT A SMILE..