by Sarah Ann Apr 27, 2007
category :
Life, society /
about society
We are the troubled of today |
by Wallace
Excellent poem superbly done. It was a joy to read from start to finish, love it, keep it up. |
by debbylyn
Well written with a great message, flow and rhyme scheme....like the way you repeat |
by Vanessa
Omg That was truly amazing. I love the way that this poem flow togater perfectly. The word choice is elegant, and vivid. the emtions strong. clear, and raw. there is absoultly no way to make this better. Now I wish i could write like that. Well done on a excellent job. |
by geeeeee
Troubled frowns now laugh today |
Awesome poem!! It really flowed...will you check out my poems plz? |