Very well written and thought provoking

Awesome poem!! It really flowed...will you check out my poems plz?

Troubled frowns now laugh today
We are the youth of yesterday.

The fact that you repeated that in your stanzas really caught my eye, and overall made the poem so much stronger than ever. It touched my heart. You made these words leave an imprint into my mind.

Take Care aye.

Omg That was truly amazing. I love the way that this poem flow togater perfectly. The word choice is elegant, and vivid. the emtions strong. clear, and raw. there is absoultly no way to make this better. Now I wish i could write like that. Well done on a excellent job.
5/5

Well written with a great message, flow and rhyme scheme....like the way you repeat

"Troubled frowns now laugh today
We are the youth of yesterday. "

at the end of each stanza...

All the best, Debbie

Excellent poem superbly done. It was a joy to read from start to finish, love it, keep it up.