Sad, but an awesome poem. I really liked how it was written and how you encorperated the title into it. |
by xXroxyXx
I love your poem its amazing 5/5 |
Alright gurl u got major talent!!!!! :) i know how you feel ive been there!!! if ya need to talk im here! smiles and big hugs! |
by Fsams
This is a different variety for sure, you have written it in a different perspective. Its really nice. Keep up the nice work!! |
by Melpomene
The title of this poem really caughty my eye, I found it to be quite capturing and interesting. This was different quite unique to tell you the truth. I did enjoy it. An emotion packed piece which was written to be beautifully sad. Keep on writing you seem to have some major talent in writing the sad and depressing poems. Great work. 5/5 from me. ~mel |