*speechless* ....That was really good. It was very dark and very sad though. Like nothing I have ever read.

Wow, you're really ggood. Your writing is truly a gift!! Oh my gosh, I'm in love with this poem. It's brutality and raw reality, have such a cutting edge to it. Wow, very beautiful poem.

Dark... but good. Keep it up. Interesting style again... good trade mark..:)

I'm completely breathless after this one. Very interesting, extremely intense. I think it had an important message. 5/5 for sure.