"Springing up in paisley-patterned green and gold,
held lovingly against the charming sky"

Excellent imagery
You've really done a great job on this. Very unique
5/5. Marcus

Bah, I have to say it: I LOVE YOU! (You know...in a friendly sort of way!)

This poem speaks true beauty....in fact, if there were a beauty pump, it would be coming out of this poem and going into somthing that needed extra beauty.

Everything in this poem is so crisp - yo seem to be really good at creating crisp and to the point poetry.

There is nothing bad about this, the language is wonderful, the flow is nice...everything is great!

I see a couple of jarring spots (line 9/10 where kiss is seperate from everything else)....but I started thinking in terms of my own poetry, and I came to the conclusion that it was done for effect.

BRAVOOOOO, I say! Bravooooo!

Excellent poem , love it , great way to express your thoughts and feelings, you did a wonderful job on this one, ~5/5~ your friend Tracy

I love this - its almost like a love poem to spring! i love the beginning part about hope on the trees fingertips - i can see what you mean, literally and figuratively. amazing job!