Very beautifully set melancholy lines..

I loved this, I really liked..

"You were my sunshine and rain
you took away all my pain. "

Great write, and an even better read. Thanks for posting. =) Continue writing.
-Ally

Excellent poem, straight to heart great write
The pain kills me inside
that I just cannot hide. well said , i loved it ,great job,will be reading more 5/5