This is so sad and sensitive. I liked the whole poem. Very well written!

Absolutly flawless flow... simple words but still the emotion comes acorss with strength... wonderful ways of describing how you feel... all the metaphors.. from the wall to the oceans .. those were beautiful stanzas and the last stanza ending perfectly... so simple and just BOOM lol it hits... a very enjoyable read.. great work :D

Beauriful poem...well written

I really liked this,
I liked the screen name when I first seen it,
and this poem is amazing, I must say.
You described everything so well without going off track
and kept to the same story,
the ending wrapped it up perfectly.
All in all, great write.

5.5
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