by xoOrdinaryGirlox Apr 27, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
secret love
I never knew his love |
by amoxi
This poem was interesting, it was a little hard to read but all in all it was good |
by Autuumnbree
Good poem, and love sometimes can be a sickness especially when there's is abuse attach. You're very good with words choice so again....GP |
by Colby
Ryhming was a lil off... if you were trying, but if not then oh well lol It was a good poem overall... i liked it... but try to use more difficult words.. or longer ones |
by Poeta
Beautiful. Great flow. So sad, but sooo good! Keep it up. |