Beautiful. Great flow. So sad, but sooo good! Keep it up.

Ryhming was a lil off... if you were trying, but if not then oh well lol It was a good poem overall... i liked it... but try to use more difficult words.. or longer ones

Good poem, and love sometimes can be a sickness especially when there's is abuse attach. You're very good with words choice so again....GP

This poem was interesting, it was a little hard to read but all in all it was good