This poem confused me a bit.
I was confused on the rhyming bit and everything.
The flow was a tad off.
Not one of your best
but it wasnt bad

I really liked this one. But it goes from being grown up to being a little kidish not only because you refure to barbie and ken though. But that is just me. It is different and that is part of the reason I like it:) 5/5